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with 497,061 copies sold - this is the lead, which aims to summarize the article briefly.I know what you mean, but you should change "it" to "The game" or something similar since we're talking about a new subject here. It received generally positive reception The last it mentioned was the Hamchat dictionary.Additionally, unless otherwise stated, it is assumed that the player-controlled character is the protagonist, so this feels a little superfluous - I would probably write "Players control the hamster Hamtaro" I would prefer to have it phrased something like "gathering his friends and bringing them to the clubhouse".

"collecting" friends is an odd way of phrasing it.

Players control protagonist Hamtaro, who is tasked with collecting all of his friends and returning them to the clubhouse as well as collecting words missing from the "Hamchat" dictionary.

It being the final GBC game published in Europe is not mentioned in the article body either add this to the body with a source, or strike it from the lead.

Italicize names of works, such as Hamtaro, IGN and Eurogamer.

If you at all want to include the Japanese title in the lead (rather than in a footnote), it is preferable to list the romanized title ( Tottoko Hamtaro 2: Hamu-chanzu Daishuugou Dechu) in the lead, and footnote the Japanese spelling, as the average English-speaker will not be able to even parse Japanese characters.

The current single-paragraph lead is quite lengthy - split into two for improved readability.But yeah, here is the review - I've split it up by section: Apologies, been sick! (but you know this because I told you on Discord).I love this series, particularly the later games for GBA~! Will do a review of this soon, hopefully within a day or two.- Alexandra IDV talk 22:28, 8 September 2019 (UTC) Reply contribs) 22:28, 8 September 2019 (UTC) Reply.